Oh those horses were so beautiful. And those landscapes, they were breathtaking. There I was, I was that horseman and fell in love with him. I extended my hand and touched him, traced his smooth jaw and patted his horse.
And then I turned the page and fell in love with a new page again.
The 55 fiction is based on the above photo prompt provided by Vidya Suri on Write Tribe.
And then I turned the page and fell in love with a new page again.
ReplyDeleteliked this line.
Aha! That's so beautiful!! The love for books is such that!!
ReplyDeleteGood one for the prompt, Sugandha :)
Thanks Shilpa.
DeleteLoL Sugandha,
ReplyDeleteNice one for today's prompt. I think I'll try to join this writing prompt too. I also wrote for Five Minute Friday prompt today. Read more about it on my blog.
BTW, a small advice, if you don't mind - it's difficult to read the text due to the background on this blog. I think you should change it. Try some other colors.
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Thanks :) I'll see what best I can do for this one.
DeleteOh the many love affairs I've had with a good book!
ReplyDelete:D
Deletenicely expressed in short 55 words.
ReplyDeleteLove expressed in 55 words. :)
ReplyDeleteindeed...love doesnt need many words.
DeleteBeautiful Sugandha! I too fall in love each time I turn the page over!
ReplyDeleteLovely love story!!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteThis is brilliant and exactly why I love to read stories so much. Well done!! It is why my mind and heart lingers with the characters long after I have read the last words. It is also what entices me to read again and again, sometimes the same loved books over and over. You nailed it! ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy :)
Deletewonderful imaginative!! getting lost in a book is something only a booklover can understand!
ReplyDeleteThank you :D
DeleteAh yes.....the wonderful feeling of falling in love with a book....can so relate to that! :)
ReplyDeleteAll of us can :) thank you
DeleteBeautiful ~ so effectively captured in a short span.
ReplyDeleteThanks Abhra :)
DeleteThat's beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteI loved how well you have recreated the scene and made me fall in love with your story! :)
Thanks :)
DeleteHa! perfect! It happens all the time to me!
ReplyDeleteRicha
:D
DeleteLoved the last line :)
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteWonderfully Creative! :-)
ReplyDeleteLol..The Love was all with the Pages.. :P
ReplyDeleteVery Nicely Written.. . :D
Ah! Another book-lover like me! Fell in love again! :)
ReplyDeleteNice as usual, Sugandha!
:) thanks Anita
DeleteI love books and can totally relate to the 'falling in love with the pages' part of this story :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.
Thanks Najm
DeleteSimple and just beautiful! :) :)
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Thanks :)
DeleteAh! that was so beautiful (:
ReplyDelete55 flash bang on for the prompt and (using the adjective again) so beautiful (:
Thank you Namrota :)
DeleteAha! That's very well written!
ReplyDeleteThanks Medha :)
DeleteA crisp 55er,e pretty nice!
ReplyDeleteCheers!
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That was lovely! :) I was wondering if anyone would refer the horse's picture on the page.. :P
ReplyDeleteI am still wondering how no one noticed it.
DeleteLovely.. The last line said it all.
ReplyDeletebeautiful 55 fiction
ReplyDeleteThanks
DeleteAh! Thats the privilege that only book lovers can enjoy...
ReplyDeletenice!
Please follow the link to read mine:
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:) Agreed.
DeleteIsn't that ever so true, each story has a new hero to fall in love with. Nice take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThanks Suzy :)
DeleteCldn't be better than that:)
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