Jan 14, 2014

Strangers in the night

They sat at opposite corners of the bed. The bed, which they were to share for the night and for rest of their lives.

She had seen him in picture; he had seen her through the veil. She hadn’t noticed the scar on his forehead. He wasn’t aware of the little mole on her chin.

Their opinions weren’t asked for, consent wasn’t important. They were tied by a knot, a sacred relationship that they didn’t understand.


They were left in the room to for a new beginning, but all they were, were strangers in the night.


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29 comments:

  1. A reality for so many still....and so difficult for many of us to comprehend. Welcome back, Sugandha!

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  2. But maybe they will soon discover a lifgetime of companionship and wont remain starngers for life!

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  3. Here's to hoping that they discover a lifetime of togetherness. Welcome back Sugandha

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  4. This reality still exists around. Strangers tied into matrimony are expected to live and adjust for life.

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  5. This is a sad reality for some even in this day and age. Well written!

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  6. wow, loved it :)
    stark truth of some arranged marriages!

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  7. How sad a reality that must be to face. I can't imagine. I am thankful to have married by choice and for love. Lovely take on the prompt. ♥

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  8. A true story for many..... written well.... :)

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  9. ohh the awkwardness ... beautifully expressed

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  10. It's such a sad reality for so many, Sugandha, and, unfortunately, many can't say no. Wish that they can understand each other and move from strangers to friends. Great write up:)

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  11. Very well narrated! It reminded me of the old Bollywood movie scenes. As Vishal said, it indeed is a sad reality.

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  12. The dilemma of both the characters is so beautifully written out. Well written :)

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  13. Atleast the scars and moles are visible in your story. What about the invisible scars and moles inside the people we love? Do we really know the scares and moles hidden inside them? Do we really think they have no secrets hidden from us. I wish thats true. And I wish we can see the scars and moles kept secretly inside our beloved person as clearly. I wish we know the person we love in the truest sense....

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